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I remember when
I remember then
I remember them
I remember us

It seems only yesterday
You and me standing together
Making jokes, feeling free
Smiling more than ever
But it allm came to an end

My world fell apart
We seemed to have drifted
You won't answer me
When you do, It isn't what I want to hear

What hurts the most
Was beign so close
And then loosing something I never had
It will never truly be
Ever again between you and me
While listening to five finger death punch's "Remember Everything" I put pen to paper during calculus yet again. I penned a poem and then a set fo lyrics that could be a song as there is a repeated chorus in it. Anyway what I was getting at here was a friendship I had with a friend before I switched schools. As it stands, still no answers from him...
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liveyourdreams1 Featured By Owner May 23, 2012  Student Photographer
cool one love the poem and the song to im a fan of them
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Take a risk, take a chance, make a change and BREAKAWAY"
Step into my head and watch as I take over the world.
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abeo-noctis1 Featured By Owner May 21, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This poem caught me so off guard because this is what I felt through one of my friendships :( very touching for me and a wonderful job
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XNightdreamxDaymareX Featured By Owner May 22, 2012  Student General Artist
I don't know if it would be a good thing to say anything along the lines of 'I'm honored' as that would just be weird on a piece such as these. Needless to say, I know your pain.
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abeo-noctis1 Featured By Owner May 22, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
And it's a pain that hurts like hell...
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AngelofNight13 Featured By Owner May 21, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Actually the part "what hurts the most was being so close" is word for word in the song what hurts the most sung by rascal flatts.
This is a really good poem and demonstrates breakups really well. Good job! :)
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XNightdreamxDaymareX Featured By Owner May 21, 2012  Student General Artist
Is it really? I had no clue at the time. May have just been the thing that just fit right in ^ ^; Eh it wasn't intending on being writen that way but it could be interepted that way. May as well have been in my book. Thank you for your comment~
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AngelofNight13 Featured By Owner May 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Your welcome :)
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